i like the layout for the images- the top is a different way on the shape of the images- i like that you thought to do it different than what is normally seen
The first design is great in that it has the pictures in shapes other than boxes! Interesting how the background is in color and the pictures are black and white.
The layout is fine. I did not stipulate that you had to include a lot of text, but I think more is needed here. A sentence or phrase, something to break up some of the space and to give the audience/reader a little more information at what we are looking at.
The top one the picture of the back doesn't flow so it threw me off. I do like that lines for in the text she talks about lines and shape forms. Nice on that part and I must say that Nicolette's bottom picture of her in a sitting is so unique and elegant at the same time I love it!
i like the layout for the images- the top is a different way on the shape of the images- i like that you thought to do it different than what is normally seen
ReplyDeletethese are nice. the colors look really good. and the photo layout is nice as well i like the slantage.
ReplyDeleteI like how in the first page, the lines flow with the images.
ReplyDeleteThe first design is great in that it has the pictures in shapes other than boxes! Interesting how the background is in color and the pictures are black and white.
ReplyDeletea bit dull and off the wall, but i really dig it! push this further and youll have something solid.
ReplyDeleteI like that you mixed up the box format in the first one.
ReplyDeletereminds of flyers i used to see back in the 90s when i was younger, retro
ReplyDeleteNot a bad start. I know you worked real hard on these layouts, so keep working diligently; I look forward to the finished results.
ReplyDeleteThe layout is fine. I did not stipulate that you had to include a lot of text, but I think more is needed here. A sentence or phrase, something to break up some of the space and to give the audience/reader a little more information at what we are looking at.
ReplyDeleteThe top one the picture of the back doesn't flow so it threw me off. I do like that lines for in the text she talks about lines and shape forms. Nice on that part and I must say that Nicolette's bottom picture of her in a sitting is so unique and elegant at the same time I love it!
ReplyDeleteI like the color choices. I like your design layouts for Nicolette's brochure.
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