I really like your start. It's neat and uniformed. I like the color choices you've chosen for this one. I get an industrial vibe from this so far. Keep up the good work :).
I enjoy the way it look industrial with the long beams/columns. I enjoy the difference between the windows and the lines. The echoes of the lines and windows kind of carry me through it. The flipped symmetry compels. I like the light blues and deep reds; it creates a coldness and fits with the industrial theme.